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A dance with the devil(3)....CielxReader

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        /He stared at you with an uncaring deep green gaze.  Just the look on his face told you that you were unwanted.  You sat in front of him with a rock hard unfaltering glare.  Blood poured from every long gash on your body and now he had a gun placed at your temple.  Your lip quivered slightly when you heard a click.  
         "What happened to your promise?  To protect me.  And now your killing me?"
         It took you a minute to realize that you said that.  His response was a cruel smirk not anything like the calm, kind smiles that he had graced you with before.
         "Don't you know, darling? I don't keep anything as petty as a promise, especially if I feel betrayed."
         His voice was smooth and hypnotic.
         "You said you loved me..."
         "Oh boo-hoo. Cry me a river.  Even you don't mean it when you they say something as stupid as that."
         You felt rage well up inside your stomach and your teeth began to grind.
         "I MEANT IT!!!" You yelled jumping up from your knees.
         His eyes widened as he took a small step back.  He wasn't expecting your outburst.  Actually he didn't even expect this conversation.
         "How dare you imply that I didn't love you!  My heart was devoted to you when I first saw you and I have no doubt that I would care for anyone like I cared for you!" You were shaking,"I gave you my trust and my love and I actually believed you did the same but that's obviously not true! I told you everything! I gave you the power to destroy me but trusted you not to!  But now...I guess I see that faith was wrongly placed..."You voice grew quieter on the last statement.
         "_____...."
         "Screw you."
         You were turning to leave when you heard the gun go off but you didn't feel anything. You turned back around to a sight that made you fall to your knees.\

          
          You shot up in your bed screaming and clawing at your sheets.  You heard footsteps running up the stairs then the door to your room slamming open.  You kept screaming as tears ran down your face as you felt soothing arms wrap around you.  You sobbed into the familiar shoulder.  The shoulder that was there when your father died, the shoulder that was there when your relationships ended badly, and the shoulder that was there....at your ex-boyfriends funeral.
           "Hush now child.  You're alright.  It's just a dream."
           You stopped screaming but tears still ran down your cheeks.  You clutched to the fabric of your mother's night gown.  
           "He shot himself...I saw it..."
           You felt her stiffen.
           "That was a long time ago...It's in the past." She said quietly.
           "So? He did it because of me!" You cried.
           The guilt that you had thought that you conquered was coming back ten-fold.  You had stayed single for a long time after that but you thought that you had finally gotten over it after you saw the Earl but it seemed that it just came back.  It was like he didn't want you to be with another and now he was holding you back with guilt.
           "Honey, It's not your fault.  (Ex-Boyfriend's name) had a lot of problems already."
           You frowned as you stood and limped over to the window.  You looked at the night sky and the dark trees swaying in the wind.  You sighed as you ran your hand on the window sill absent-mindly.  Your fingers brushed over a folded paper and you picked it up.  You looked at it blankly, instantly recognizing the penmanship.  You felt your heart beat pick up.  Ciel.  You were about to open it when images from your dream flashed in your vision.  You instantly felt pain hit you.  You frowned.  It was wrong anyway.  He had a fiance.  Why would you be excited?  You don't even deserve another relationship anyway...you practically killed the last one...
           Then another thought ran through your head.  How hell did these notes even get into your room?  Surely your mother would've known if they were mailed here...  You felt anxious as you opened the window but you didn't notice anyone out there.  The only breathing thing out there was the crow in the tree next to your window.  You felt your palms start to sweat.  How did he even know you?  You don't recall meeting him before and if you did you were pretty sure you would have remembered...
            You felt your heart beat with fear.  Was he stalking you? But why?  Cold sweat ran down the back of your neck.  You held the note firmly in your hand.  Was he watching you now?  If he was...how?  You felt kinda violated...
            You felt anger seeping into the pit of your stomach.  How could he just disrespect your privacy like that?! Well, assuming that he is stalking you...  You're rage won over your fear.  You angrily crumpled the note without reading it and threw it out the window.  What the hell...is wrong with that noble?!
            "______? Are you okay?"
            You turned to your mother and nodded as you limped back to bed.
            "I'm fine now.  Thank you," You smiled sweetly hugging her.
            She smiled and hugged you back.
            "Goodnight."
            "Night."
            You sigh exasperated and angry.  Stupid noble.  You rolled over and closed your eyes.  And as if fueling your anger you remembered the kiss.  Why the hell had you been so excited?!  He was cheating on Elizabeth!!!  You growled at your pillow as you fluffed it.  This guy had serious problems.
Heyz! Guess who~?

*****IMPORTANT********


This chapter sucked big time but whatever. I had read my last chapter and began thinking...What girl in her right mind would fall in love with someone who openly cheated on his fiance and somehow knew who she was when she had never met him before? I mean it actually seems like he is stalking her with the note and invitation! Well, you know what I think of it but the real important question is what do YOU think about the story so far?

Criticize me! Constructively! I wanna know what I do wrong and right so that I can improve.


And the beginning...yeah...I just wanted to write that scene.....
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kalea1018's avatar
Plz continue +20000000000000000000 more